popping pills
eating glass
stainless steel
smoking grass
if i had a dime for everytime i wanted to get away
i'd have all the dimebags i crave by now
i finish rewinding all this shit up, some jackass pushes play
got to unplug this game, but got to first know how.
i'll smash my head gainst the screen till something breaks
- i don't care which
and you can write on my tombstone
mother nature is a bitch
love to shut the world up permanently
i'd cut their throats out
then hear them try to shout
'be happy!' -hmm, looks like you could use some surgery...
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give feed back.
i'm buzzed, does it rhyme and rhythem?
35 comments:
*wince*
yoysh. you sound buzzed. what does buzzed mean?
wasted/plastered/high/etc.
thats what I thought. I just wasn't sure you used stuff like that. I'm nieve, remember.
Oy, the world can be tough.
hope you feel better
caffeine deprivation, too much smoke inhalation, simple frustration- they all bring me there.
well, sorta...
s.J. - you need a good walk in the sun.
Have you ever read some poem by Rabbi Judah Ha'Levi? He has some bitter exclamations which might stimulate you into another perspective.
Here's a few lines. Seemed relevant:
"I Cry out to God with a melting heart
and knees that strike against each other,
While anguish is in all loins,
On a day when the oarsmen are astounded at the deep,
When even the pilots find not their hands.
How shall I be otherwise, since I, on a ship's deck,
Suspended between the waters and the heavens,
Am dancing and tossed about?"
And who the hell cares about rhymes?
deep.
i suppose everone's got their method of dealing with life.
(no more walks. i just did that yesterday)
I suggested a walk since it's one of the methods I know is almost foolproof, and improves a state of mind.
s/t you just feel/want-to-be miserable.
and all the walking brings you lower
To address the technical points first--the rhyming scheme isn't consistent, but it is there. The rhythm is irregular, but I can follow it.
I'm sorry that life is being so rough on you right now. We all need to get away sometimes....
*sigh*
scraps- thanks
anon- i wish i knew more people like you.
Good stuff! sorry to see you in that state though. All the zing went away so fast?
tomboy is right about walks, any I know what you mean about wanting to stay down. but is it right? hope you snap out soon.
sj, why sn#2, does it have a blog attached?
i don't think ur feelings are so unusual. you just know how to articulate better than most.
b'hatzlacha.
o and showers always calm me down :)
s.w/f.m.- ahhh. the upsers and downsers in life.
trixies- beginning of s/t that didn't work out.
sabra- thanx- but i usually get drowsy from a good shower. and sleeping isn't ALWAYS the answer.
Yeah, wish the ups were more than the downs.
i guess...
: D
(took the words out of my mouth.)
alrighty then.
i'll remember that.
update < gasp > please.
im dying here slowly [literally]
psp- yes i can spell my own name. just..um..didn't want to po the ladies..
in the near future, my slightly demented friend.
got to get some dw40 for the old noggin.
i have duct-tape in my emergency kit in case it goes the other way..
ha.
thanks.
wow. sounds like you can use some chillin'
care to give me a few pointers?
still my fave rant to date. been looping through my head forever.
mind control, phase one: complete
make it stop, make it stop!!
bwahahahaha!
shitnotthemasonjars.nonononooooo
don't worry; i've got battery acid this time.
t'll be painless.
oops?
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